A Part Of Chapter Two In Doomed

December 10, 2006

This is a part of chapter two in the story I am writing called Doomed. If you haven’t read chapter one you should. Go to the bottom of my page and click on next page to see more posts I put up. I just have two pages because I wrote so much.So now here is my story.Kyle and I met in kindergarten but didn’t become best friends till fourth grade. I don’t know how we suddenly became friends but we did. My name is Kevin Aces. Kyle was always fit and healthy. He was always far ahead of me on the track when we ran a mile. Every time we ran that’s how it went until one day he was slower and looked paler. The day after that I finished the mile before him.I was worried and went up to talk to him.”Kyle are you okay?”, I asked him with a look of fear for him.”I feel fine.”, he answered without any voice change. If there was a bit of voice change I could tell he was lying. I left things alone after that until he started looking thinner and so white it was as if he was a snow person. I knew he had to notice the changes in his appearance and I know that he is too young to be going through puberty. That might be a bit of a gross word but that’s what was going through my mind. I looked for Kyle the very next day at school but he was absent. I went through the day hoping he was okay. Kyle wasn’t at school for the rest of the week. Because of this I called his house. His dad said I could come over. After I hung up the phone I got my mom to drive me over to his house as quick as possible. I rushed inside when we went up his driveway. Kyle was lying on the sofa and said “Kevin I’m sick. Very sick.


Doomed Chapter One

November 15, 2006

Reading Emily K.’s blog I thought, I am writing a story and I could put it up. So here is the beginning of it. Have you ever been embarrassed and felt like your life was going to end? Well imagine how you would feel if your life was going to end and you knew it. Imagine how you would feel if you were going to die. This is how Kyle Oak feels. He is stricken with a disease that is unnoticeable to the person whose body it infected. To sum that up it means he is sick but it doesn’t feel like he is to him. No doctor in the world can find a cure for him because it is an unknown disease. Kyle is my friend and I will tell you our story. Keep posted to see more of my story. Before you go to someone elses blog this story is based on me and my best friends friendship. This is not a true story but the characters are based on me and my friend. My friend isn’t really sick though. This book is called Doomed and this was chapter one.